Today I had to finish writing my Evaluation Commentary Plan, record it and then make and finish a directors commentary on my trailer. This is also the final day of this project and I finished my directors commentary early

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I liked hearing the response from my friend and thought his criticisms were constructive. I hadn't thought about many of the things he mentioned (like the voice overs feeling unnatural and the visuals being too modern for the film) but it made me regret not researching more into old comedy trailers and emulating their style instead. However I'm still happy with how my trailer turned out and I personally think I've majorly improved from my music video, not just for editing with Premiere Pro. I have quickly gotten better at researching and overall I'm doing much better than before. I'm proud of myself